Complete with crappy iPhone video, with phone sitting on my bag.
Critique away. I'm currently off 13 (just - 12.5) and think my ball striking is a little above average for a player at that level, my short game is probably worse than average which cancels that out!
It has been an interesting exercise to watch it on video actually. The first thing I noticed is that I am hunching over a bit too much and my stance is a little wide. That's a 5 iron I'm hitting in the above videos....