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  1. 11th July 2013 09:40 PM #1
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    Hi guys we are working on a new 15 second tv commercial. This is what the company came up with would love your feed back.

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  2. 12th July 2013 08:21 AM #2
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    Looks good to me.

    Doubly so, that the owner doesn't say anything, which makes low-rent ads look like very low-rent ads.

    ps. I hope it is only a 20 second ad. At the end (17s-20s), 'Ammo Doors' is featured for 3 seconds, followed by 'Amarr Doors' for 6-8 seconds.
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  3. 12th July 2013 08:34 AM #3
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    Ammo Doors - more bang for your buck.

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  4. 12th July 2013 08:56 AM #4
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    Yes 15 sec ad the last bit im not sure why they added it.

    JC that sounds cool

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  5. 12th July 2013 08:56 AM #5
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    Looks good to me.

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  6. 12th July 2013 09:47 AM #6
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    Ammo Doors - Use us or we'll ****en gun you and your family down!
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  7. 12th July 2013 09:59 AM #7
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    Looks cheap and boring. Audio quality for the voice over isn't pro quality.
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  8. 12th July 2013 10:16 AM #8
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    Starts well, ends crap. Need to end on the Ammo Doors part.
    Viewers aren't concentrating. Ammo then Armar, or whatever it is.
    The voice is poor quality Ben.
    Would take a redub and small edit at the end to make it good.
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    What Matty said.




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    thanks Matty this is just a temp type one they have sent us they did say they needed to redo the voice.and it is ment to stop at 15 seconds not sure why the last part is on there.

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    Looks cheap to me, like they did it with a phone camera.
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  12. 12th July 2013 02:00 PM #12
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    Quote Originally Posted by markTHEblake View Post
    Looks cheap to me, like they did it with a phone camera.
    It will be done in HD this is a sample of what they think we should have

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    Sack them and get a company that care enough about your business to give you a quality sample
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    Quote Originally Posted by damoocow View Post
    Sack them and get a company that care enough about your business to give you a quality sample
    Can you recommend any?

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    Ben, one of the young golfers I have watched growing up now does Business & Wedding videos and their results are outstanding. I am going to try get him do something for my company (he doesnt know that yet). They are pretty young (mid 20's)but that might be why the are good - have learnt all the latest tricks.
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    check some of the business video examples.
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    Thanks Blakey

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  17. 12th July 2013 09:36 PM #17
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ben Tullipan View Post
    Can you recommend any?
    http://hire.pro-cam.com.au/Post-Prod...es-pg4365.html


    http://bigbridge.com.au/

    Ben - I think you'll find there are lots of industry people out there who would look at the sample you posted and be horrified at how poor it is - hope you manage to sort it out
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    Ammo Doors : Guaranteed* to make you 50% more attractive to the opposite sex.





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