Thanks Virge, this is excellent, I really appreciate your help. I tried to incorporate some of this and compare to Rocco.
There is not much on him, and this swing doesnt have exactly the right frames. But just looking at his lower body, when our hands are covering the left thigh directly below left shoulder, id say our lower bodies look similar, the cross lines are where hips were at address and although its very dark in mine, i dont see much difference in our hips or lower bodies when hands are in the same spot.
Ray gave me a tip about feeling the weight on the outside of my right foot at the top and that seems to have quietened my feet. Obviously there is a big difference in our right shoulders. Mine is way lower at impact. From behind my shoulders are aimed parallel to the target line and are slanted on a parallel plane to the shaft, to my way of thinking this is because I am rotating my upper body around my spine as hard as I can to keep from stalling...and flipping.
To look flatter on the right side, I am trying to turn my right shoulder towards the target rather than around my spine. Im finding this difficult. Should I be worried about this move closing my shoulders to the target at impact.
Here is the swing and then the comparison to Rocco with lines. Really grateful for your comments as always!
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